Here is my third rough cut that I talked about in my previous post. It is a lot more slick and professional than my previous rough cuts as all of the timings are the same and all the fonts/credits are the same.
I am extremely pleased with all of my shots and the duration of each of them. I feel they are all now in the correct order and tell my narrative perfectly.
I am also confident that the continuity level is high as I cannot spot anywhere where something doesn't match, This is a large improvement to my previous films as the continuity in those were extremely amateur.
Enjoy!
It's very good. A few things:
ReplyDelete1. The audio for the New Line ident cuts out a little too soon
2. Being finicky, Shia LaBeouf's credit should probably come last, and be credited as "and Shia LaBeouf", considering his actual cannibal status...
3. I think the "Directed by" credit needs to come at the end - if you add another credit somewhere (another producer credit) and shift the writer credit, you could put the director credit at the end and fade the music out on that.
I still think you need a brief dialogue scene at the end - maybe 30s of Kieran's character having a mundane but significant conversation with another character - but it's not essential; your work is L4 already. You might want to look at playing with the saturation, to make it look a little more washed out, but again that's not essential.